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Submitted: December 12, 2012
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macross frontier fan art of Ranka Leeby *MangaSkyX

Manga & Anime / Digital Media / Drawings

Yup I'm a fan of macross frontier! I draw a fan art of Ranka Lee. I couldn't get the eyes right. (That's a mic she's holding in her hand)

I used reference pose from

Critique by =TheLeatherNotebook Dec 20, 2012, 3:54:31 AM

Okay...uh..hi..i'm a total stranger. But still...I wanna give you a critique

-Let me start of first with the face...the eyes look like they're falling...it should be a little straighter.
- Next, the angle...it looks like she's just tilting..if you wanna make it look a little sideways..fix the face and add a little bit more shading.
-The upper body needs to be fixed...a person is not that thin technically..and her chest looks a little deformed..you should have completed the curve at the left side of her chest.
-The hands need to be fixed..it needs to show a little bit of curveness. Plus the hand on the right side..the pen looks like its gone through the hand. Yikes.
-The shoes need to look a little bigger.

But on the bright side..the shading is good and the skirt looks well designed

I hope this helped and I'm sorry for being mean in any way

What do you think?

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Critique by *thewafflefactory Dec 19, 2012, 10:39:51 PM

This is my first time ever writing a critique on someone's work. Now, the first thing I noticed is that the eyes are wrongly proprtioned. It looks to me as if you just copied the first eye and pasted it just as it is. The composition of the eyes would be much better if only you had rotated the right eye just a tad bit counter-clockwise. Another thing I have noticed is that the way she is holding the spoon is quite awkward. It almost looks as if she stabbed a pink plastic Baskin Robbins spoon in her hand (ouch). The legs look like they dont have any knee joints, therefore making her legs look like jello. I have to be honest though, I like how you drew the skirt with the detail in it. Overall, it is an OK drawing, but that only means that you have tons of room for improving and solving any problems that come in your way. Remember, everyone has the potential to do anything!

Cheers!
-thewafflefactory